Wow! Great story! Had me on tenderhooks wondering how he was going to get out of the situation. Having been scuba diving, and having a small panic attack my first trip out i could so feel for John with that awful claustrophobic feeling as he slowly sunk to unknown depths! Was willing him all the way to make it back up the coral. Loved the way you used Rodney to show the 'blackout' periods and his growing confusion. Having the bends was a natural progression and loved the way you showed the team's concern, from John's 'out of it' POV. Great ending1
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Date: 2011-08-09 10:26 pm (UTC)